I drafted this exercise in sensory writing in the early 90’s, exact date or context impossible to determine. 

Electric sweetness, like an angry bolt of crazed lightening , penetrates the crevice in an ancient cavity.  A nerve shreiks; a scorching current charged with searing pain negotiates its charged neural course; my knees weaken as the formerly-tantallizing peppermint becomes the debilitating tormentor of my bones.

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